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Originally Posted by MichaelRyerson
Short answer, 'into every life a little rain must fall'. Longer comment, yes, I considered the sheer weight of it. I can leave it, I can delete it, or I'm open to suggestions. bear in mind if I reduce the image, the detail necessary to make the text meaningful is lost. If I post the original image size the scrolling will be multiplied by a factor of 2.5. What's your pleasure? By the way, I did not disassemble the image for the forum, it was meant for my photo-stream where I feel a responsibility to notate as many buildings as possible so that the image will show up in subsequent searches for that building.
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I'm not saying you wrote too much, I'm just suggesting that you reformat it so it's not difficult to read.
The image seems a good size as-is, and, admittedly, inserting a hard return at the end of each line to shorten its length would be a hassle.
But I think breaking your single 2,251-word paragraph into several paragraphs would go a long way toward making what you wrote more reader-friendly.